I don't write poetry but this is my first attempt, so here it goes:
Cold breeze, beautiful sun,
What can happen then?
Hidden chaos.
Is this life all about?
Everything changes suddenly!
Never explaining what has happened.
People die, families cry.
So inhumane…
Why innocent lives?
Now where are the fake one?
Homes are on fire from inside.
Fighting and arguing,
Never compromising!
Where has all the love and affection
gone?
Faded like it was never there before.
The world is becoming a global
village
But where is all the friendship?
All the promises?!
Buried in the cold souls?
Beautiful night,
The moon so bright!
Just waiting for a miracle.
What else can happen?
Good Attempt but more improvement needs with grip on native language! I'd also one penned a poem which got printed in US Mag long ago, I remember only two lines of mine that poetry; The title of Poem was; I Know Not! The two line still fresh in my mind were;
ReplyDeleteI can't live with you, yet I can't live without you;
Is this love or something else?
I Know Not!
I Know Not!
This is really good :)
ReplyDeletethanks :D
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