Thursday, November 27, 2014

Reckless in the Fortnight...

Beneath the dark sky on a starless night,
The curious moon sings a lullaby;
Wind kisses the face, reckless in the fortnight.

Standing there with the guilts, lies and regrets,
In the solitude that spoke a thousand words;
Those tears which melted the ice, reckless in the fortnight.

In the midst of reality, shattered dreams and betrayals,
Beliefs and burning desires standstill;
Wishful dreams, love and happiness still blossom, reckless in fortnight.

The shattered soul waits for dear ones,
Too much to say but hope is thin;
The thorns hurt but roses still spring, reckless in the fortnight.



11 comments:

  1. I LOVE THIS.

    So beautifully expressed.

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  2. It's a lovely combination of strong hope and pessimism. You should try to write more often. Loved it..

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    1. thanks a lot :)
      inshaAllah wil keep writing more :)

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  3. This is absolute portrayal of not simply feelings, angered suppositions and yearning wishes. I have an issue, the issue of strayed creative energies. Your sonnet has put forward the push that was required to place them in circle. The draw that you have attracted from the begin to end is plain as day. It seems to me as though a lady stands still at the edge of a mountain viewing the city lights with the chilly breeze hitting her face, offering movement to her hair twists which are exasperating her clear face. The time evidently remained on the wrong side however flowers still blossom in alienated deserts. Hope is the pharmaceutical that keeps numerous alive. Exceptionally wonderful Fizza.

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    1. I am honoured.
      I am amazed by how you described the imagination, it was so much like what I felt while writing this:)

      Thank you so much :)

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  4. Last but not the least, all reckless in the fortnight.

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  5. سچ سچ بتا دو یہ اتنی گہری باتیں اور شاعری وہ بھی اتنی ننھی سے عمر میں کہاں سے سیکھ لیں :) یا میری طرح لکھوائی کسی سے اور چھاپی خود :))

    مگر ایک بات ہے بہت ہی زبردست ہے ماشاءاللہ سے اور امید کو ہمیشہ خوف سے مضبوط رکھو

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    1. haha bohat bohat shukria :)
      Bs kabhi kabhi likhne ki koshish krti hun :)

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  6. اس کا اردو ترجمہ بھی پلیز

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    1. puri ka to mushkil ha magar main point ye k hamesha umeed ap k khauf sa bari hoti ha :)
      Allah pa rely krain sab best ha :D

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